You say you don't believe in miracles
And Heaven is only a myth
But for me that statement would be wrong
You hold Heaven in your kiss
After life is just illusion
And angels are for fairy tales
But when I think of all the times with you
I beg to differ, I believe they're real!
When I touch you, and you touch me
Heaven is born instantly
But I know, I alone am here
The miracle, so miraculously
I met you, and you met me
But I know, you don't feel this
If there's no after-life, then when you go
How come I'm alive, when you next show
But I know, you don't see me
There is an angel, oh just one
She is you, and you're the sun
And I know, you'll always be
The embracing arms that I need
I hurt you once and woke-up stuck in hell
It was worse then what they said it would be
For without you I was all alone
Hoping for an end to my misery
Then you came and heaven reappeared
This time maybe you will stay
The memories of when, and the moments of now
Slowly now they become the same!
When I touch you, and you touch me
Heaven is born instantly
But I know, I alone am here
The miracle, so miraculously
I met you, and you met me
But I know, you don't feel this
If there's no after-life, then when you go
How come I'm alive, when next you show
But I know, you don't see me
There is an angel, oh just one
She is you, and you're the sun
And I know, you'll always be
The embracing arms that I need
Well you don't seem
To realize how much you mean to me
If it could be
Then truly heaven would become eternally
But you don't, feel the same, as I do, when with you
Cause to you it's just another day
What's the point, of this life, without you, is darkest night, please don't leave
Cause your presence's what I need
When I touch you, and you touch me
Heaven is born instantly
But I know, I alone am here
The miracle, so miraculously
I met you, and you met me
But I know, you don't feel this
If there's no after-life, then when you go
How come I'm alive, when you next show
But I know, you don't see me
There is an angel, oh just one
She is you, and you're the sun
And I know, you'll always be
My religion, and my deity
Nothing can change how much you mean to me
And I know, you'll always be
The embracing arms that I need
Author notes
This is a song that I wrote one morning. In my sleep I dreamed up this beautiful song which I forgot once I woke-up. this is my closest attempt to recreate it. please realize that this is not nearly as good as the original version.
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Comments
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This is a good poem with a sing-song quality, I could almost hear the rhythm in my head as I read it. You express what you feel well in the song, though I think what could possibly be missing to make this piece 'amazing' to me is a bridge - not that what you have written isn't amazing, I just find that I'm not as attracted to as I could be.
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Very good write here
Expressed very well with an abudance of love for another .
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A lovely poem about being with one you love. It was a little long but otherwise a perfect poem.
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I admit this was a great piece. ALIL LONG FOR MY PERSONALL TASTE, BUT AS QUITE A FEW OF MY WORKS, LENGTH IS SOMETIMES NECASSARY WHEN YOU'VE GOT A STORY TO TELL. VERY HEARTFELT AND IMAGIONative. thank you dear for sharing this piece here with us all
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