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river of no return

the nature of the boxer is to fight on

to not withdraw, still standing firm

 

you face the mountains,

nemesis of your flow,

where you begin in cascades,

in trickles and stone

to the ocean's mouth

yet this is not your home

 

past bloodstone and shale

over pebbles lime and smooth,

this is a fight the river

will never end, will never refuse

 

and i will sit in your fragments,

the parts you allow

before the roar is shallowed out

to the mouth of a distant sea

 

watch the eagle find his meal

as the salmon spawn

take note of gentle toed deer

as they quench a thirsty need

 

and in the end you are like me,

the search for a silent home

where birch and willow can bend

to touch the surface of your grace

 

reflect the colors of unheralded dreams

from the strangers who come to the silence

sit and wonder of your distant path

as i watch you now, in twilight robes

at peace and all alone

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • thepoetssoul
    July 21

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    Thank you for the entry

    Tony

  • Well done here.

    Enjoyed this

    Good luck C

    Passions


  • myrataal silver member
    July 4

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    It is in the lonely hours ...

    that the soul can reflect and mirror itself in the beautiful route of the river's journey: through undergrowth and over rocks, bended and stretched in flow and in fall, towards the Ocean of Origin.

    May your river takes its natural path, unobstructed and pure, poured by the ever-wakeful Heart.

    Love
    Myra

    • Thank you dear Myra, I have spent many hours of contemplation by the rivers, their peace washes me when I have struggled to find answers. C

  • great work done here, imagery and flow. Beautiful

  • Wow, this is just beautiful. Best of luck on a very well written piece!

  • How beautifully pure.

    ... and in the end you are like me ...

    that stanza truly says it all brings humanity much closer to nature with its comparisons. Excellent work. I loved it. ~Pamela


  • arafura gold member
    July 3

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    "past bloodstone and shale
    over pebbles lime and smooth,
    this is a fight the river
    will never end, will never refuse"

    Fine poetry my friend. You took me there.


  • DolceVito gold member
    July 2
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    Superb piece, beautiful poetry

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