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Helpless

How can I endure this mediocre existence?
Plagued by uselessness and sufferance.
I live to fail,
That’s all this life entails.
I'll never be who I want to be,
That’s a future I'll never see.
Please let this be a dream,
Then maybe there could be some hope I can gleam.
The only opportunities I get,
Only serve to make me regret
Ever trying at all
And remind me that I exist only to fall...

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  • So sad and I can relate on so many levels =[
    Your rhyme and flow are wonderful, it read like the eerie eb and flow of the ocean at dusk,I truly loved it this piece.

    Be strong