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icarus

to travel in the brightest fights
thou hadnt deserved
but to cry to own everything
speared by magnificent and perfection
of simplicty
thou splash into mist and ice
of crimson tired and frosen in place
into the heart of which thou hath loved
nothing
nothing

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    July 3

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I love the ending to this I think you finished it very well. A nice write you have here, welcome to the site and if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
    Laura,
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  • Polaja Greeters member
    July 3

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I think you mean "frozen" not "frosen" - but other than that this had some nice imagery and I did enjoy the take on the Icarus myth well done!

    Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!


    Polly
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