i cry
unable to withstand the pressure
drowning myself in self pity
knowing you'll never love me again
i walk
trying not to fall down
the weight of the world on my shoulders
growing weaker with every step
i'm home
falling back into bed
reviewing the days failures-all alone in my head
too tired to change clothes
not enough energy to care
i sleep
my escape from the world
the only place i feel safe
yet i get no rest
i dream
because there i am happy
mom and dad are so proud
you love me
every reason to live
-then i wake-
my parents yell
i disappoint everyone
you won't even look at me
no tears left to cry
so i die
relived of my pain
i can sleep
f o r e v e r
hopes and dreams never fulfilled
it's okay
i didn't matter, not to you, not to anyone
it's alright
you couldn't have known it would end..not like this
it's ok
after all, it's only all your fault
Author notes
i was extremely depressed when i wrote this, that was awhile ago.
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Great
and you said I was better? Very emotional and very descriptive. I really liked it. Especially the last line.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
Very nice use of emotion in your words here, I hope you aren't feeling this still. The only thing I would suggest changing is capitalising your lower case 'i's other than that, a brilliant write. Welcome to the site, if you have any questions please feel free to ask me.
Laura,
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
I hope that you aren't feeling this way any more! I really like the way that you started the stanzas with a simple statement
it is really effective - well done on a great start here!
Welcome to the site, I hope that you enjoy your time here at AllPoetry!
Polly
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