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Give in.

I walk around with my heart in my hand.
If you want to you can just snatch it
and kick it around in the sand.
I've been through worse pain,
Even been thrown out in the rain.
Lonely and cold
The world always leave me shaken up
but never stirred.
Don't even flinch when people,
without reason, throw stones.
I get up and do it all over again.
Even get ran over by my friends.
I guess I'd rather feel pain
than nothing at all.

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