It's finally hit me.
I don't have you around
anymore. I lost you. We were
so close. People thinking we
were nuts when we went to the
pool while it rained.
Tears slide down my cheeks.
Where did you go? I want to see
you again. But your gone. I know
you can hear me. But I can't hear
you.
I know you can see me.
But why can't I see you.
Only thing I have left of us
is a photo we toke the day
before you left this earth for
good.
It's pouring rain. I'm standing
in the middle of the road screaming
and crying. I fall onto my knees and cry.
I scream out: Please come back!!
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Dedicated to all the loved ones I lost.
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"Tears slide down my cheeks.
Where did you go? I want to see
you again. But your gone. I know
you can hear me. But I can't hear
you."
I lost my papaw when i was a child..and one time he told me a story his dad told him when he was younger and his mom died, about how his dad told him when it rains, to look up at the sky cause its gods way of clearing out the clouds so his mother could look down and see him.
[thats what this reminded me of]
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Great write! Good luck!
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Reminds me of a book I read...Princess, about a Saudi Arabian princess - her biography. You have much in common....
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