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Hues of Sepia

There's this look
In their faces tonight
Moving slowly
In ephemeral light
Dreaming quickly
As sleep is denied

Like a broken real
It's doomed to repeat
As tarnished images
Flit through the screen
In hues of sepia
They're not who they seem

It's growing quietly
In the absence of sleep
Familiar feelings of
The thoughts underneath
The waking mind and
The stench of deceit

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I wrote this in about ten minutes just to write. Inspired by a weird image in my mind and very little fact.

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  • Mandy Pants
    September 27
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    i cant even describe the peaceful feeling these rhymes give me. i love your rhyme skill!