I love you with all my heart!
without you I would fall all apart!
I love you with all my heart, body and soul!
if you weren't in my life
I would be like a pencil that has run dull.
I love you so much that without you
I don't know what I would be.
I would be like a blind man
navigating a boat lost at sea.
She is what makes my heart beat,
she is my world, my everything, my life!
I know that one day I will ask her to marry me
and then she'll be my wife.
See without her there is no way I could be.
Cause me without her just really isn't me.
This is the love I feel for her
and I hope one day she will know.
Just how much she means to me
and how much our love can grow!
Author notes
Dedicated to my love Shelley-Ann!!!
A contest entry
- Lost In Thought... *PRE-WRITES WELCOME* by dominated angel25.
4300 points, ended December 2, 65 entries
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Love that grows from the very start, has a way of lasting longer than a love that seems to just blossom over night. You have shown the love You feel with this.
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SWEET, YOU ARE OBVIOUSLY VERY DEVOTED.
THIS IS A BIT REPETITIVE, BUT NOT TOO BAD FOR IT BEING YOUR FIRST! -
I love it
This is truly full of feeling and color, I can see the love you have shine so loud. Very well done
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Now thats love!! very well said, good rhyming!!! great job!
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Thanks man!
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enchantment all about in this wonderful write and i am delighted. a light in my day… a pleasure to read, and i thank you for sharing your talent with us!
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Ty
Thank you again for the kind words.. I appriencate it.. This was my first poem that I have ever written and I love this girl very much...
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
Beautiful display of feeling here.
I like how the first part is as if you are talking to her and then you change the second part as if to tell the rest of the world how you feel.
Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
Keep expressing through writing.
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TYVM
It was easy to write because it is exactly how I feel.. I find it easier to write when you have all the emotions in you.. This was my first poem ever.. Thanks for the comment!!
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