She’s five foot fine, and nine inches divine,
neighbor sex galore, she’s my fantasy.
Bathing underneath the heat of my eyes,
suggestive fingertips swirl sensually.
I dream myself inside her moans, melting,
nibbling on her erect nipples, thoughts sway.
My tongue mingles in-between ecstasy,
flickering inside, where rose petals play.
Tantalizing me with masturbation,
simultaneous visions mate as one.
Stimulating dreams unfurl intertwined,
mounting her hips as her lips come undone.
Deep penetrations, thick liquid inside,
passions released, in this lair I take pride.
Author notes
Photo Credit: http://www.worldofstock.com/slides/PMO2095.jpg
BG By: PassionsPromise
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A contest entry
- CALLIN' ALL PASSION LAIRS POETS!! GROUP CONTEST...18+ ONLY Applications Accepted by PassionsPromise.
1000 points, ended July 20, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Timothy!
Holy cow! What has gotten into the AP men
that all they write about is ---yummyness---?
This piece is totally hot and awesomely describes
the pleasure of a passionate moment whether it
be with rosie palm and the imagination -or- the
real thing! very well written, and very "real".....
Thansk for sharing with me ont this site.....
Blessed be poet,
your friend,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
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Potent with a pulsing edge...
I really like where you go with this one.
How you manage to keep it confined in rhyme,
I'll never know!
Blue
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Ooh this is very sensual !!
“Bathing underneath the heat of my eyes,
suggestive fingertips swirl sensually.”
Nice lines these... Best of luck to you!
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nibbling on her erect nipples, thoughts sway.
oooooooooooooooooooooh lala lmfao !! this was so so beautiful i enjoyed it a whole lot hon good luck in the contest
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sweet job
Well done my friend, Best of luck, Boog
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Man! I think I need a cold shower! ITs wonderful, so passionate! I love you writing, all of it, truly!
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omg, you dont often write these, but hey you even master erotic stuff
Yea the passion is pouring from your words.. Excellent stuff
Love always,
Lonely
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the thing i like about this is it shows the senuous side of you without taking away the romantic side.you know how to display passion without the expliciteness that would make this vulgar. when you lift your pen and put it to paper, the work of weaving magic begins. you are the master.
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'five foot fine'.. love it.
That's a nice poem. Sounds about right for the contest.
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Shewwwwweeeeee!!!!!
Hot damn bro this is one tantilizing steamy write from ya. I got to admit it mad me go Whoa when I saw the pic and then whew mad emy gl;asses steam up in an instant when I read red hot write from ya. I have to admit you really do have a flair for the dramatic in this case for a dramatic erotic write. I love the deep depth and the painted imagery that comes from reading such a rushing write. anyways beautifully penned with a stroke of genius. I will not be suprised if you place in the contest. excellent work and very good luck with the contest.
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Mistress Passions is sure smiling..
and hell, why do you have to go off about my masterbation before ...oh hell, sorry..
Yes indeed points will go up when I wake up..if i ever go to sleep lol.
already some heated entries and this one..top notch
Thank you and good luck
Mistriss Passions
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Hott!
Nice BG, and lots of steamy imagery to go along with the photograph. You know I always adore your works, no matter what the topic is, you can weave it so beautifully! All the best in the contest!
K.
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