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Blood lust

Creature of the night
Creature of evil
With a lust for blood not seen by man
Blood is its life source
Sunlight burns it and silver it shuns
You feel its teeth dig into your neck
you feel your blood leave your body
Fear grips your very core
soon you will be one of them
Death is better than being a creature of the night
Your sight is enhanced allowing you to see cars
and little things that hide in the dark
The smell of an innocents blood nearby
nearly drives you insane
You can hear the sound of flies and birds flying around.
Other smells like garbage and hot tar
are faint unlike the blood
what will it taste like?
Metallic? sweet? flowery?
As you bite your first victim everything you once knew is gone.
You have begun anew.

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  • Papabear 4 Rosered
    July 8

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    HHmmmmm....

    Childer, you should not reveal the secrets of your people. Do you here me telling all of the secrets of the werebears? I'd recomend that you put an addendum saying that this is fiction and not any true knowledge of vampires or you might shatter the masquerade. It is well worded though. I like the revision, you made some good additions and it has a bit more spring to it. Good job!


  • JesskaSlayde
    July 2

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    i adore this poem. some people struggle to write such things but you did a wonderful job. i love the last line. it is a wonderful ending to such a powerful poem.