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My Mask

Does anybody realize my pain,Am I that good of an actor?  I never believed so but no matter. Can these people I hold so dear take the turbulence,or will I be alone again... to slowly wither.  Can't anyone see by my "perfect" mask;my pathetic cover, or will they stay that naiive forever?  Either way I will stay the same walking alone yet with others. Until they realize,I'm wearing a cover.

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