Break on through the paper world
Cage the damned in the corner of the mind
He cried, the summer lights faded
Watch your soul rise to dreams
Eyes closed, the world opened up
And the ram came and made you see
Truth became dream and dream reality
Heart beats a drum of life
I see Venus in my sight
She offers me wisdom in life
The paper world, ripped open by my mind
Solid becomes... dream
The 3D world was gone to the sky
My God.. my God is watching me
Eye of enlightenment waiting for me
And my body watches as my soul takes flight
In the stars in the universe, in the dawn, the light
She gives me the serpent, I'm flying in dreams
The paper world, ripped open by my soul
No longer drawings but imagination grows
Take me, take me up unto the darkness
For I shall shine like a glowing sun
The paper world...is... gone..
Please tell me what you think
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This had so many aspects of so many great writers.......
I can tell you are well read and have retained a sense of
style from so many...
yet i see you in it clearly lass..
i like the repetition of the last stanza's first line.....
such power and grace you put in to every word of this.
and i get a visual....
from the last stanza especilly
of the end of our video.
Your magic is endless gypsy,
Liam
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Thank you Liam for a lovely comment on this poem. I love what you said and your analysis is accurate.
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Deep but whole
Wow, you write with such depth and hope. I love how strong this feels and so secure in it's message. woderful, just wonderful
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