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The Sound of Life

A heart breaking

Silence overthrown

Fears overpower confidence

Silent prayers for me

I stand silently strong again

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Describe to me the sounds of life.
Must be 15 lines or less

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  • crivanea silver member
    July 9

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    wow...I love this..."silence overthrown"..great word play for this prompt..the picture goes well with it too..I think you did a good job with this.. very wise words..strong lines..and simple..but powerful..