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You've Trapped My Beating Heart

Careless words spill out of your mouth,
though they mean nothing, I'm amazed by their intricacy.
Sentences spewing out in beautiful lace ribbons that shown bright against deep scarlet,
trying to surround my still beating heart-
doing a damn good job.

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  • sgking123
    November 8

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    wow

    this was so intense and emphatic..the careless words that capture you by their meaning...yet speaker is ahrd put to understand you feelings..i loved it...visit me and comemnt me if you do like