Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

and she screamed: 'forget-me-not'



I took sunbeam scissors and cut the moon from the sky;
peeled off her mirror faces and overlapped them as
moonlight petals. heaven embraced her again, though 
she was no longer a reflective celestial body, but a bloom,
and she screamed: 'forget-me-not, O love."


so I fished the sun from space and burned my fingers
folding daylight, severed the purple lining of evening's
beating chest. hyacinths and black-eyed susans blossomed -


but you took no stock in looking up; what was there
worth looking for? polaris fell and the great bear roared;
did you see? did you hear? did you listen? did you look?


no. like a drumbeat on the warpath. no.


we fell from our sky-city, where all the pretty people live;
all around you we fell, like hail, like rain; shooting stars
at the end of a world.


I still don't know who you were.
you died before you could find yourself.






Author notes

prompt 2: word bank. use at least 6 words.
words used:
- scissors *
- moon *
- sky *
- forget-me-not *
- sun *
- purple *
- evening *
- hyacinth *

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 12
    Edit | Reply

    This is a very intelligent penning, Poet. Impressive, once more.



  • rainbows. gold member
    July 14

    Edit | Reply
    Wow. I agree with my co-judge. This is brilliant; the imagery is absolutely stunning. ♥ Thank-you for entering my contest.

  • WOW

    Brilliant imagery! This is a wonderful piece. Honestly, just gorgeous. The last lines really end it wonderfully. Thanks for entering it in the contest, and good luck!

  • monkey3243
    July 2
    Edit | Reply
    it was really nice
    good write