Looking passed what you are,
Searching to find the person you used to be.
but that person has died long ago and it isn't fair
to the ones who try and love you.
just go along and push us away,
mister know it all,
but you got it all wrong.
you can't love anyone that way:
i wonder if you see what your doing.
Is it because your little angel is growing up,
is it because you know i'm all that you have left
around you for you to control and feel lifeless?
Look around and see what your doing,
damage you've caused,
never felt good enough and never satisfied.
can't point the finger at anyone else,
i have to run to the arms of another,
cause i'm worthless and needy.
Don't want me to be trashy,
i'm not.
look beyond the youth and ageless beauty,
all you see is pain,
heartless ,
and death.
oh and you don't like it...
Author notes
about my parent, and how he makes me feel....
and all the pain i have inside.
and its time to vent i guess.
A contest entry
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what do you think about this, what do you think its about?
Comments
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this is a sad and good poem. i like how honest and open it is although, i have to ask, what do you mean by this being about your parent?
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WOW. when it comes to writing poetry, you are very talented. such heartfelt emotions in this, i could feel the anger burning in your words as i read this. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
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emotionally strong and aggressive, once i started i couldn't stop reading. You have talent and i can tell this is probably one of few if not your only output. keep writing, i think it will get you somewhere
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Look around and see what your doing,
damaged you've caused,
I think you meant "damage you've caused"
other than that...it's a great write. Thanks for sharing
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