She's snuggled inside
the realms of release,
tripping on a dreamscape
view of reality
Residing in a dimension of
inter-changing anomalies,
cast against a distant sunlight,
where demons dwell in ecstasy
wandering the underworld of descent,
mingling and mixing in jesters bliss,
until unsavory spirits bind her tail,
with the bewilderment of salaciousness
A contest entry
- Bed Head by Emmyb.
2000 points, ended July 19, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent poem, different but clever take on the prompt.
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great work i love the way it flows and how your use of words paint a strong and vivid picture
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much better
a very interesting piece
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please change your font colour so it is easily readable. thanks.
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A++
Excellent vocabulary and imagery...very fine poem....:-) -
Great use of vocabulary to make the image even stronger
Doing all this and still not losing the flow
it was a wonderful read
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Great imagery and flow and choice of words...Regards Hazel
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Wonderful. This poem has so much imagery and you used wonderful vocabulary. I have to say the title is very clever as well!
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Great vocabulary, imagery, flow, That was just great! Thanx
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A masterful pen of darkness
as spirtis jest and tamper with
her beauty, wanton ways...thus
enjoying some very passionate
sexual treats....an excellent write
& take on the contest.....Novy
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