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Emo Times

Emo Times are depressing

Especially when it comes to lip-pressing.

Emo Times are very dark,

In your life it will leave a big mark.

 

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  • SuicidalBlackshadow
    July 5
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    I Love this... So much truth in so short a poem, so much emotion... I Love it, keep writting...


  • individuality gold member
    July 3

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    admirable talent, here, kind poet! exceptional poem with fine images that spark out the story in clever ways. stirring and uplifting, this poem makes me smile!


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 3

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Well, I believe that each moment is what we make of it, and if you think these times are depressing- do something about it. Be a leader!!
    Nice for a short write- says a lot of feeling and emotion.

    Welcome to AP . If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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