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Lamp

Missing image

I rubbed

the soul lamp,

chanted
for a life time.

But You summon

in mysterious ways.

~tonight

You are a lore,
a genie that takes

my prayer by the wrist,
and leads me
inside Your Lamp~

I become a moth

within Your Flame!

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  • Peteskid gold member
    July 12

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    wonderful imagery of the lamp and the flame, a spiritual sense here that is very comforting...very well done...PK


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    July 4

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    Humm..the image is well conceived and brouaght here the thoughtful scenario dear friend..thank you so much for the wonderful entry in my contest...


  • Nicolette gold member
    July 4

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    such a soft glow about this poem.... it shines, like joy!

    ~ Nicolette


  • Draig aine gold member
    July 3
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    a sigh , just a sigh

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    July 2

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    As usual, you have terrific control of the language when painting images. I loved the mysterious quality of this write and the way that you commanded brevity... allowing the imagination to rocket off in whatever direction the reader might fancy

    And, just beccause... I'm signing with my birth name instead of my nickname

    s and best wishs always...

    ~Jean~


    • inder silver member
      July 2
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      Delighted

      Encouraged and happy..always am ...by your enriching comment. guess Jean liked the genie poem!

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