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reprogramming

until they met again by chance

she hadn't realized
how she had preserved it
    set aside a place so carefully
    and kept it safe
        the picture of she and he
        inside her brain
and how it had preserved her

a smile
a clasp of hands
    respectable
    not overtly intimate
        for two who had shared
        those things most intimate
long ago

first, words to summarize lost years
then he produced the poison dagger
    the picture of he and his family
    to make an incision
        so precise and subtle
        to bleed her out completely
before she knew that she had been cut

as he spoke she stared
into the faces of his wife and children
    a virus slowly wiping
    out her hard drive
        the new picture quietly
        burning its imprint
rewriting over all her memories

killing her softly


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  • Welcome to AllPoetry!

    Unfortunately this has become a scenario man come to know. You have written it in a different persepctive, a fresh take if you will. Nicely done with your word choice.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feelfree to IM me.
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