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[ Have you ever felt that rush of energy that gives you a shiver? ]

Have you ever felt that rush of energy that gives you a shiver?
The one that tingles down your spine like a flow of a river?

That electric shock that has such a deep affect
That not even pain could take away from the way you react

I call this feeling love.
It's like no other feeling sent from above.

When you open your eyes your realize it's time for school.
The place that feels like a whirlpool.

You get taken into pressure.
You make mistakes that may last forever.

                                       

                                                  ~TheBreezeBlows~

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