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Come on, Let's Dance

I can barely see anything
A mere strobe-light
shines on our path

I've only just met you
but it all seems so right
One night couldn't hurt

Well, come on, let's dance
Dancing?
More like sensual touching
and thoughtless remarks
of mutual love

Wow, I think I've gone wild
I wanna kiss everyone in sight!
Your lips are so magical,
and mmmm, tasty as well.

Let the night never end
or I'll be a freakish mess
I can't go home now
for you made me into
a very, very bad girl

Author notes

inspired by take me on the floor by the veronicas
and a teensy inspiration from good girls go bad by cobra starship =]

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  • Lislaine
    August 12

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    wow! This is soo awsumfrigletacticness!
    I liked it soo much!!

  • I feel like it is a girl's prerogative to have one night where they get completely out of control. This captured that pretty well. Aaand, I love the color scheme. ♥