If you gave me a sunflower
I'd put it in my hair
For all to see
How you truly care
Its fragrance a reminder
Of the kindness you bestow
Its color
A representation of your natural glow
When the wilting begins
I'll put in a frame
Hang it on my wall
For a memory it became
If you gave me a sunflower
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prompt: If I gave you a sunflower what would you do with it?
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The opening of this poem is gorgeous
I really like the emotion that you have used and the way you have expressed it - the only thing is that the rhythm is disrupted a little by the uneven line lengths in the next stanza - but that is just a small thing and overall I enjoyed reading this thank you for entering!
Polly
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wonderful rhyme.
beautiful write.
thanks for entering,
good luck. -
i like this. great flow and rhyme. i love your take on the prompt. great job. good luck.
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Awesome
I love how simple and true your writing is.
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If you gave me a sunflower
I'd put it in my hair
For all to see
How you truly care
I love those lines! Great job. -
I absolutely love sunflowers
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