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Breathing Beating Dead

Whats it mean to truly die?
I'm breathing but I'm not alive
Heart's beating but no feeling inside
Just idle hands and empty mind

& whats it mean to be alive
I see no beauty with these eyes
just reaching hands and screeching cries
The Grim Reaper's here to end your time

And boy, watch it go by
but its not time that flies its life
You were born to die

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  • named.disaster--x
    July 2

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    fantastical

    wow. pure poetry(:
    and bit darker than i had thought it would be, but the title should have been the first hint.
    amazing piece.

    keep writing,
    page.