Light flickers from heaven
as petals surround her fine grace,
swaying to heavenly hymns.
Elegance and passion meld
reaching to eternity
in perfect, soft stroke
to the garden of paradise
She is the flower spirit
dancing and twirling
as nature strokes essence,
dressed in adoring petals,
sweeping dominion's hips.
As life bends to
wavering will,
beauty breathes acceptance,
flickering in momentary sighs.
Then as passion and serenity meet
a wild escape through enlightenment's gate,
sweeps into dancing dimensions.
Author notes
Picture Credit - ♥ Prompt- http://s265.photobucket.com/albums/ii237/Poeticlydarkgirl/?action=view¤t=dancing-1.jpg
No more than 30 lines.
A contest entry
- ~Petal Dance~ by Hope Angel.
525 points, ended July 11, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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This is beautiful, it almost seems to be filled with the grace you talk about. Nice imagery thanks for entering
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The poem dances...
as well as your "flower spirit". very lovely write.
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Excellent
wow, such wonderful word choice for the prompt. You made it come alive. Best of luck in the contest.
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i have this sudden urge to pick petals away, and sing a song, i have no idea why. a good poem, it moves with fine grace.
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