why can you never understand,
my feelings aren't the same.
Its not your fault, i hurt you,
and i accept the blame.
i know for sure you like me,
but i cant bring myself to say.
im am so very sorry zach,
but i dont feel that way.
i do however, love someone,
the feeling has snared me too.
but i never felt that way, sorry,
while i was looking at you.
theres somone else, who owns heart,
i can relate in that way.
and he will grow, forever, more dear,
with every passing day.
im sorry that i hurt you,
im sorry once again.
im sorry for breaking your heart,
and im sorrry for causing you pain.
i cant say it to your face,
and i hate to be this shy.
please think not, of what could happen,
but for the other guy.
i feel like a coward,
not telling you how i feel.
even lying to myself,
more truths to conceal.
i cannot bear to see you,
so torn and despairing.
and because i think its cruel,
to leave you without caring.
it may be hard at first,
but in the end you'll see.
it would be better for the both of us,
if you stopped loving me.
i cant ask you to stop caring,
you'd have to stop breathing too.
but know, no matter what is said,
i'll never feel the same for you.
Author notes
i used the title "im sorry" but just changed it a bit, i hope you dont mind
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that was sorta kinda sad
"i cant ask you to stop caring,
you'd have to stop breathing too.
but know, no matter what is said,
i'll never feel the same for you." love that stanza its the best!
thank you so much for the entry and good luck!
ermm which title did you use im guesing its 'im sorry ' but please could you write it in the AN? thanks x
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thanks so much for entering the contest, and best of luck.
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Beautiful Write.
This was beautifully written. Though it was very personal which restricts the ability to convey and relate in an entirety it was still a good write. Which option number is this?
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Its an unforgivable sin, he wont talk to me anymore... =( ty for the comment =D
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