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Found my place.

My rhymes are my own
I know the way they've grown
And all the feelings i've shown
It was all to help you
I'm here to steer you in the clear
show you that its not all fun and games
Not to live a bully life naming names
Your master cant lay these down forever
My rhymes godda end, never say never.
But now its the beginning.
I'm leaving the world,
I know if you could you would.
And if you can you should.
Because its the most wonderful feeling..
I've found my place, now i can begin healing.

-Thomas Edwin Reid.

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  • This has a rap like spoken word quality to it!
    I love writing lyrics, or at least the attempt is made at every turn of the pen! Great write and welcome to All Poetry too!

  • Beautifully penned, loved the ending, excellent!:)

  • Juggies
    July 2
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    Wow, Amazing. Touched My heart.