May the pillars of Artemis
stand strong, holding up this symmetric
fortresss, with orange disks instead of
gargoyles, and black marble and wafer wings
for walls. Falling missiles from the gods do
not crush, for I was engineered by a Greater
Mason, who guards this 8th wonder in a land of
giants, so that my magnificence may be enjoyed
by all.
What's your gut feeling? Any suggestions?
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This is strong. Paints a vivid picture for the reader to engulf it's full meaning. Nicely done with this, nicely done.
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Storm
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a good piece, we called them ladybirds when we were kids, i have not seen one for ages, i like the old feel here merged with the new.
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