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Tears Of Blood

Every time i cry
i cry tears of blood
why i do i do not know
when i do someone i love dies
why must this happen to me?
why are my tears made of blood?
Why must i hurt so?
why ME?
was i meant to to save someone?
why oh why do I cry blood?
is it mine? is it real?
someone please stop this madness
I am afraid that i may go insane.
Then again it could be too late.
Do i seem crazy to you?

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 22
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    It happens in love that you do cry a tears of blood.
    But this is not a permanent state of mind.Just a transit.


    • tiredoflife
      November 22
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      Thankfully that moment in time has passed for me. I am no longer in pain. I thank god for giving me strength to get me through it. Now me and my girl are back together.


  • Tainted-Faith
    September 5

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    Just a tad, but im COMPLEATLY crazy so you musn't be THAT bad.
    I feel awfull that your pain is so bad and that people you love die (im guessing that its a mostly true story) and i hope you eventuly stop feeling this way.

    • tiredoflife
      September 9
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      it is a true story. all those around me seem to just die one after another. the only thing in this life that keeps me from ending my own life is the love my girl. day in and day out i slowly stop feeling the way i do.


  • xeroabyss II
    September 4
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    Metaphor for killing/destroying, emo or Castlevania?


    • tiredoflife
      September 4
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      most likely emo.


      • xeroabyss II
        September 4
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        Do you know the Castlevania tune of the same name?
        Tis a good jam.


        • tiredoflife
          September 4
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          fraid i dont.

          • xeroabyss II
            September 4
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            I noticed you hav what seems wuite a collection of vampire themed writes, if you've ever played and liked Castlevania games, you should look up the song some time.
            Hell, I even think there are some metal cover versions of it floating around the internet somewhere, like on soundclick.com or somewhere.


  • She burns
    July 2

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    so painful here and happens all the time, it hurts, the endless suffering inside...

    ...I hope you feel better soon

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