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Darkness

From dusk till dawn i roam
for to the darkness i am bound
to roam this world alone
for all of eternity
Why must i suffer so?
What have i done to desserve this?
Darkness owns my soul
It surrounds my heart in a blanket of comfort.
Will i ever be normal? Will i be free?
Darkness is my only comfort.

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  • Papabear 4 Rosered
    July 8

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    nice use of the word but it is a bit difficult to read due to the color of your typeset. may i recomend you try a lighter color font? sometimes we purposely use a font color that is difficult to read for literary emphasis but i don't think that it would work well in this. i did in my piece " NICOLE MARIE " please feel free to check out what i mean.