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Dont go my love

Blanketed in swabs of sorrow your voices are all i hear
When i try to avoid you,the words begin to come near
Crashing onto my body leaving me in Lear.
Caught up in the moment stunned like a deer
Hatred releases the body with such enthusiasm
Cause my  nerves to twitch and begin have a spasm
Laughter soon be gins to fill the air
No longer do i dare
Now black lungs begin to engulf me
Fighting with you wont solve this, cant you see?
Wasting every breath is just another tick on the clock
Knowing with each passing second your about to leave for the dock


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  • wow that so sad but man your a good writer

  • This poem is so sad yet so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!I loved it Cameron keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!