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Past love

Past events on the swing set
those are the times i will never forget
Hearing you scream my name
Looking back at those thoughts it will never be the same
Running through the parking lot so much on my mind
Running next to your side you have such a bind
I thought i lost you once and it will never happen again
Like a code to your heart  im unsure of the pin
So please just let me in
So once were together we can begin

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  • s-i-m-o-n-e
    July 4
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    wow your amazing i hope he lets you in

  • PoisonRain.x
    July 2
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    great write


  • Kinky Cuffs
    July 2
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    I loved it!Brilliant write!!! I agree with Barchetta I loved that line!!


  • redbarchettadrive gold member
    July 1

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    This is such an awesome line Cameron:

    "Like a code to your heart im unsure of the pin
    So please just let me in"

    Sounds like an awesome memory tho! (Except maybe for the screaming part)