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Guangzhou China

Guangzhou, girls no frills, beautiful none the less.
Lines no wait, push, but wait anyway.
Air, mostly smoke, but gotta breath sumthin.
Food, stares back from the plate.
Streets, look, leap, trust in destiny.
No smoking section, ha.
History, lives among the high rise.
News, Tibet is free, monks are crybabies, China is great.
Girls, beautiful, and everywhere, so many makes it hard to breath.
Magic, mushrooms, and mysticism, are medicine.
Smells vary.
Americans stand out, mostly not for the good.
Cats all mean, don't try and pet.
Buses, sardined, take a taxi for cheap.
20 US live life large, 40 a day you can be a king.
Pick pockets, are pros, put it in you're pocket, give to charity.
Noone speaks English, what nerve they have.
Be careful what you point to in a restaurant, you will have to eat it.

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