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Cottages

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white picket fences hot coffee kids, butterflies
sweet dreams of life on sunshine lane
across our road chickens flee pecking seeds, corn
home is where the heart will always be
planting flowers down by natures sea

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Is she dreaming?

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  • tomisb
    July 4

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    Beautifully Done

    From the confined, "white picket fences," through the sublime, "life on a sunshine lane," to the cosmic, "nature's sea" you swiftly gift us with a vision of peace, soft laughter in a forever well graced.
    Love,
    Tom B.


  • Rheea gold member
    July 3
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    what we want for our daughters

  • monkey3243
    July 1
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    good. kinda short tho. at first i thought you just posted a picture