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I Am

I am the girl who loves to dream and fantasize
I wonder about all the things that couldn't be
I hear the overwhelming sound of sudden silence
I see the raindrops as they hit my windowpane
I want to travel around the world someday
I am the girl who loves to dream and fantasize

I pretend that I'm cool
I feel like I'm on top of the world
I touch Sunshine as it illuminates me with light
I worry that all is not as it seems
I cry for those less fortunate than me
I am the girl who loves to dream and fantasize

I understand the mysteries of the universe
I tell myself it's all okay just to make it through the day
I dream of being able to fly away
I try to be all I can be
I hope that one day I'll find the one that is to be mine
I am the girl who loves to dream and fantasize

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  • i really like your i am poem

    i did one like this frosh year. this is a really good one and hard to beat. good luck in my contest!

  • ^_^ how nice.
    Hopeful.
    I like it, this declaration, or at least... the declarations here.
    "I want to travel around the world someday"
    yep yep I do too.
    I like how honest this is! Plaintive. Subject here... just radiates beautifully.
    "I hope that one day I'll find the one that is to be mine"