"How pleasant you are,"
Said the hopeful young child
To the fictional character of the north.
"And how jolly and kind, will you please be mine?"
"If only you're a good little boy."
So the child went off, new knowledge in head
Unaware of the lies that had won
And that night in his bed
He dreamed of treasures and toys
And that is how false hopes are spread.
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wow, i liked the rhyme.
the beat and the rhyme really synced with me, ths one will be tough to beat! thanks and good luck in my contest!
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hmm interesting...i like it good job its kinda like awww how sweet then like oh...not so sweet. if thats what you were going for great job!
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