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It’s Amazing How Three Little Words Can Defrost a Heart

Words spoken in such sweet salute to the heart,
Bringing about a change never to stop once it does start
Awakening such emotions that spark something so strong
That has not been embraced for so long
Till it becomes an inferno to the soul
Heart beating fast as such emotions become out of control.
Passions ignite with such a force never felt before
While with eyes anew they stare at whom they truly adore.
And take the role of action for more of a better cause,
Feeling overwhelmed with such joy in a brief moments pause.

The coldest heart now melts upon hearing these three words,
Forgetting the past and all that had been endured.
A maiden’s beauties within her eyes do stare,
Showing such affection and that she truly does care.
Never before feeling such a thing like this they could feel,
Wanting to believe that there is no way it could be real.
Yet the words are spoken so tender and true,
Awakening the heart with such pure emotions.
Giving the soul the strength to accomplish all it must go through,
And showing that person such strength and true devotion.



Such three simple words that have such strength unlike any other before,
Bringing about such emotions that make the one wanting so much more.
Opening the eyes to a world before the eyes that has never been seen,
And to this cold and lonely heart a second chance does redeem.
Words normally mean nothing floating upon the summer air,
For people do not take time to listen and care.
Yet there are the three words that forever shall warm the coldest heart,
Making the soul never for these sensations to them to part.
Lost within the wondrous pleasures which flows through the veins,
Like a tidal wave that could never be restrained.

Those three words that can burn within the heart with a mighty blaze,
And the gentle loving expression from a maiden’s gaze.
Such sweet obsession that it does bring forth in such tender desire,
Forever engulfed within fondness eternal fire.
To speak those three simple words from the heart and soul so true,
Those three words in a tender voice…. I Love You.

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