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Iris

With in your Eyes I see The Truth and the Lies

Your Greed,Love,Hate and Pride

Such a Demonic Beauty
With wings of soft leather and Bright Burning Feathers

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this poem is about the contricdicting nature of mankind,
sometimes we're lovers who lie and somtimes we're liars who love

tell me how this made you feel

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  • this is amazing robobuddie..
    so simplistic..but with such emotion behind it..
    great job

  • ur really talented w/ words =]


  • novacaine.
    July 13
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    simple and beautiful;
    i love it.

  • Moon Raven
    July 3

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    I love it. I simply and completely adore it. Just like all your poems. So beautiful yet simple. I've become quite a fan

    Great job, great message. Keep it up!

  • I have it on my phone

    Gosh. But its AMAZING! Like I've said before. Great write. love you!

    ---cookie---

  • .I feel i should say something but im not sure what to say,

  • so good!

    so little words, but it says so much. Really good. I really like it! great!

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