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Uh-Oh

The sun is shining high
and I want to get a tan,
forget about the sunscreen
'cause that's for an old man!

Soaking up all the rays
while laying on my mat,
I hear a strange sound,
but it's probably my cat.

The sound gets louder
and my skin feels strange,
I finally take a look,
and BOY what a change.

I was a pale teenage girl,
now I'm different and tan.
And there's more to that,
... I'm now an old man.



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That's what you get for not putting on sunscreen! lol

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  • GotLilt
    July 3
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    Yep sun will do that to you! cute poem