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Unstable Vessel

A vessel filled with water, sloshing about
Unstable
Tumultuous
Frothing about

Never still, ever moving
No time for rest
No time for thought

Each movement shakes the water
The water, in turn, shakes the vessel

Tumbling, spinning, swishing about


Such is life
The outside upsets the inside
The inside upsets the outside

No balance
No place upon which to rest

Just swishing, hoping for a settling that will not come

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