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Fading Hope

Hope fades, dying embers in the night
The last note of a dirge, hanging in the air
Softly slipping into silence

An infallible wall before,
Now, barely two stones atop one another
shelter for none, a mockery of comfort

Such a feeble thing is hope
A paper-thin shield against the horrors of existence
Broken by raindrops and tears

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