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Were better together

Love songs touching the heart
Thinking of you, we wont part
Just tell me how you feel
Dont act so shy
With that hook on me you reel
Hearts touching with some kind of bond
Thinking of our lives together and beyond
We count to infinity and try to picture our how long we will be together
Its hard to imagine cause your unpredictable like the weather
strong like a storm
and gentle as a breeze
Till were together i wont ceize

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  • wow i hope you stay together bthan just great poem keep it up thumbs up

  • oh wow i like this poem its romantic and has your feelings put into it nice job!!!

  • Fantastic poem! Its sweet and loving. Romantic but strangely mysterious. I loved it!!


  • Kira65
    July 1
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    it is a good poem, it has a great flow
    A very good first post, keep writing