this is a freestyle
I知 getting buckwild
Off the top of the dome
I bust nuts and create a child
We値l name this one
rhyme and reason
Cause he痴 hot like this
summer season
I知 suspected of treason
But I plead the fifth
Crack open my bottle
And drink my fifth
Of that hypnotic
Add a lil hennesy
And get bionic on plutonic
Plutonium Ebonics
I blaze the chronic
To set my mind free
Of extraneous debris
That always troubles me
I love to give
It allows me to live
I知 outta here
Gotta go handle my biz
Author notes
this is just me playing around..lol
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LMAO!!
steamin!!! You got "fifth" twice try to find somethin else, but this is freakin money!!!
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thanks for the read. i knew i had 'fith' twice but it made sense and plus i was just 'playin around'. best wishes to you.
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This aint no garbage Mo.. its freaking brilliant, weird yes but its fantastic.. perfect flow
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thanks for your kind words my friend.
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sara has clappys now!
yay!
hi 5 XD
Took a while, but i did it!
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Garbage?
You must be high if you think this is garbage! Mo, this is great for just "playing around". I think you don't give yourself hardly enough credit! I loved this. Good flow and rhyme and most important, very entertaining.
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thanks for your support my friend.
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Plutonium Ebonics? Just playing around? So what do you do when you get serious? No need to answer, I've seen. You are one hell fire spitter. I love reading your work.
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thanks Gypsy.i really appreciate your comments, compliments and support. i love your work as well. best wishes to you.
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ok no i dont
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that's ok.
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ohh i have enough for clappys now!
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Haha, someones bored!
ahh this was lovely and i liked it alot.
A differnt cup of tea that i swallowed down whole!
id give u clappy claps, but im broke
so just pretend there are clappy claps
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thanks for the read and the imaginary clappies..lol your support means alot to me. take care.
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Bravo
haha brilliant mo.... just fucking brilliant
"Crack open my bottle
And drink my fifth
Of that hypnotic
Add a lil hennesy
And get bionic on plutonic
Plutonium Ebonics
I blaze the chronic"
that part is my favorite. way to go mo
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im glad you liked this 'garbage'. thanks for your support. best wishes.
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nice play around loved inice job seetheart
Gutta On Deck '09
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nice to see you on my page. thanks for your support. take care.
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Outstanding!
Wow, the words are just amazing!
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thanks for the comments. they mean a lot to me.
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L.O.L.
yo kid this is a fly off the chromed dome..holla at yo boy over the phone he not at home dig me dude?? l.o.l. love this son!!
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you crazy bro!lol thanks for the support homie!!
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this is real good, made me laugh. yer a good writer, i can tell already :]
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thanks for your comment. it means alot to me.
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HA HA HA!!! I enjoyed this piece a lot. Before I actually started writing poetry my friends and I would freestyle in the school yard it was always a lot of fun! Brings back memories! 2 claps for entertaining me!!
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thaks for your visit and reading this. i really appreciate it.
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np you made me laugh!
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