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Circle

Sunshine sparkles down on me
Warmth coats my skin
Shade cools me from a nearby tree
I feel just right again
Nature seems to agree
To the sky I raise my chin

What a beautiful beginning, happening all over again

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 1
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    nicely done and properly centered there is a nice tone to this keep it up nice job