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unfinished..

I want to show you this hole in my heart
A place once occupied by love
Ill tell you the tale of how we did part
And how she's watching from above

I want to show you my soul
So that you can point out the murky spots
I want you to teach me self control
So that I may earn my plot


Author notes

Trying to force through a long time standing writers block if u have any ideas or suggestions as to which direction i should take this or a fresh thought non pertaining that may give me some fun stuff to write about then message me please

if u have any ideas that would nice

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