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Alice In Horrorland (Twisted)

Down through the rabbit hole
Fell little Alice
All dressed in black
Striking with her malice

She met a little rabbit
Ripped off his head
He was all skin and bones
Better off dead

Then she found a drunk
Sipping on his beer
She shoved the bottle up his a**
Called him a fu**ing queer

Upon she met a cat
With hypnotizing eyes
She ripped them out and smashed his head
And left him there to die

Then she met a bug
Lighting up some weed
She cut out his heart
His body started to bleed

Then she found a queen
Fat stupid whore
She found her palace
And knocked on her door

SHe went up to the broad
Fist in the air
Hey bit** I'll be the queen
In my own nightmare






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  • cutieie1234
    July 12
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    awesome. very creative.

  • Genius +]
    I think maybe you could also mention whether or not she becomes the queen, like maybe the card men comng to attack her and what she may do about that?

  • totally briliant. loved it

  • likey xD

  • This is effing amazing! Bloody Brilliant! I Love it!

  • I got bored -shrugs-

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