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five

the splinter of youth
broken by the disception of reality
such a fragile little thing
torn apart bit by bit

but there's a magic within us
a mystical ability to survive
as if imbedded beneath our skin by some foreign creator
we thrive in this misery

blink my love
and watch us still be there
blink my love
and you're still in my heart

this love is tangible only to us
only we see it's ability to grow strong amongst the thorns of life
sing to me of all your fears
and feel me hold you through the night

can you see the truth of us?
the immortality somehow found between these beats
listen as you pulsate within my veins
filling me whole, forever more

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