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Transparent Tales

Nursery rhymes depicted

from another place in time

fairy tales told to innocent kids

who naively believed every little bit.


A figment of one's imagination

twisted and corroded,

just like a rat taking to bait

snapping it's head off

in one fell swoop


Hair matted with blood and flies

all because mommy and daddy

told us a bunch of deceitful lies.


Unforgiving, maybe, but

take a closer look and you'll see

me and sissy aren't the only ones

who believed.


Mommy and daddy

fell for the stories too

the day that they said I do.


Their marriage wasn't all rosy

like they led some to believe.

 

 

 

 

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  • An interesting piece of poetry
    gave me some food for thought and a darkness too
    Strangly enough at the moment this line

    told us a bunch of deceitful lies.


    hit hard as I feel I am in the middle of this myself at the moment

    Nice to see you writing
    best wishes Julie