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Good Night Moon

Curving flowing elegant grace,
To look upon a full out moon,
Shown to me in moments pure,
In advance of the new days dawn,

What is real?
To see color, or feel black and white.

Myself I'm prone to cooler airs,
shadows play upon my eyes,
Grand is simple, and simple diffuse,
As in a dream.

Run through fields, dew drops fly.
Lifes breath glistens,
And magic lives really.

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  • why thank you

    There is something magical about being under a full moon, runnin around like an animal. It fullfills my need for otherworldish adventure.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    July 15

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    This is a beautiful little piece of poetry, it was jam packed with imagery, nicely done. Best to you in the contest